Mini Saga
After Christmas holidays, we have to return our blogs. This week, I'm going to try writing a short story. I didn't know anything about mini-sagas. But, last Thursday, we read some of them at the English class and the teacher suggested us to write one. I've written a mini-saga, and I would like to know if I'm able to make me understand in English with only fifty words.
Happy Wedding Anniversary
He arrived home soon, with a bunch of roses. A surprise for his wife. They had been married for twenty years. He walked upstairs and opened the door of bedroom. One year later, he was cooking the dinner. The ring bell rang. It was a messenger. Finally, he was divorced.
When I was writing the story I noticed that it's very difficult to write with few words in a foreign language. I wish you like it.
posted by Maia @ 3:27 AM
5 comments
5 Comments:
Hi! Goog mini saga although the end is a bit tragic but...very common end nowadays!
I think it is perfectly clear!
Maybe each reader will interpret your story in different ways.
Good job!
Thanks for trying!
Ephimeral relationship as those I percive nowadays.
I like it!
Good Mini Saga dear Maia! A happy man who didn´t know about her wife’s problems and worries. A short but, unfortunately, real story. I know some men on the same situation.
here is the mini saga i wrote for english:
a fairytale ending.
the wedding was great,the cake was awsome,
a fairytale ending not after all,
after the honeymoon i had to do
all the housework.
his feet up on the table watchin t.v and eating dinner.
was this the prince charming i married?
maybe it was better living with my step-sisters
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